In ascending numbness
you can think clearly at night
and see the half-moon throwing
the silhouettes in dim light.

^This is my favorite part of the poem, the begining part... in ascending numbness... the more numb one is, the clearer one thinks per se? I guess so. I mean it can be. It's sort of like... when we are numb, we don't have many feelings getting in the way, so the mind concentrates on many other options/ideas. hmm, I can't put it in words, but thanks for sharing.

I agree with luce that is my favorite part as well. You writing I feel as been improving greatly from what i've read at least. But when we feel numb we cannot see any light from anything. You are a pessimist in life. Every morning is a constant battle. Overall this is a wonderful write because of the wording you used and the story you tell. Well done.