by Mahal Ko Kuya Ko Dec 8, 2013
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Life, society /
other
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by Jenni Marie
Judging comment: |
by Everlasting
Actually, this is one of my fav poems by you. It seems your mom( or the narrator's mother) doesn't treasure the hard work your dad put into collecting those pearls, it makes me wonder why? Perhaps, he didn't spend as much time with his family that he didn't make as many memories with them, than he spent by looking for those pearls. So in a way, I can see why the mom would feel the way she feels, but I can also feel the words of the Grandmother. So in a way, I like the story behind but I also like that this piece makes me think, I can actually make different interpretations until I arrive to an adequate one. And in a way, I could just ramble but in a few words, I like it. |
by Beautiful Soul
I can see this poem as a memory of a good time you had with your family. It seems to me you are very fond of your family here and I like the details you used. I love poems that are based off reality. Memories are made of bliss... I like this line because they truly are. No matter what we go through there are always good times we can remember. Great poem overall. :) |