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To me it felt like death has released you from the torment allowing you to escape quietly into the night. I also see it as an animal who sheds its old skin, or a butterfly breaking from its cocoon starting life anew..like the image!

I like this poem a lot! I believe what you are saying is that you are finally free of something and now you can be fully happy. I loved the last stanza the most because it tells a happy story altogether. I love how you worded this as well. Because again it tells a story of being free of maybe poverty. Great flow and great connecting stanzas overall. Well done