I see this poem as a depressed person going through something big. Like something has happened to them and now they cannot deal with life right now. I loved the stanzas imagery you used. I loved the consisanty of the lines. I also like how you put it in the life category because it seems very personal to you. Overall this is a great poem well done. :)

There is a battle within you which has left bitter memories in a lonely heart and behind each line there is a voice that has decided to deal with this circumstance but at the same time the pain as well. Hope that you will be able to find the light one day to clear your dark moment..take care.

Good written.
Everything is about your confident, definitely you can get away from your darkness and the light is in your positive thinking.
Wonderful poem & keep writing..

Another well wrtten poem, heartfelt and raw,

don