Interlocking Hands

Jenni,

I was all ready to give a detailed analysis of this poem in hopes for another praised comment (mercenary, I know, lol) but all I will say after reading is Beautiful.
I love the ti amo touch, too - this really made me smile.
All the very best,
Ben

This poem has a great free flow and romantic imagery . The thing that stood out was the way my attention was cleverly aroused by the Italian phrase that is so universally beautiful

I saw your post in the message boards and didn't know what to expect but this is outstanding and probably the best love poem I've read on here. The title is simple yetit speaks so much to what you wrote about. The poem as a whole is great. The imagery is vivid and I loved the real life secene you bring alive.

I can see this scene enfold right before my eyes which always makes for a better poem. I loved how you just use two characters well and bring the room to life as ypu used just one scene. It's hard to describe one room and I believe you did it so well. It's stunning because you pinpointed the two lovers and made the story vivid. I loved the ending as well because it throws a bit of a twist in. And the plot might be revealed. (You are happy). I personally think that is the most powerful line in the whole poem.

It tells me that you were lost without this person in your life and you have had your struggles. I think this might be the love of your life or even your first love. I love the emotions you used overall. There is a hint of sadness inside the depth but most it's heart warming and welcoming. Beautiful write overall. :)

I love this poem. The two in it seem so close and the feeling you have seems so strong.
Yet, i feel like you dont want to admit what you are feeling yet to yourself. Maybe you are worried about being hurt, or your feelings being wrong?
Great poem!