Comments : Brilliance Is Your Shadow

  • 11 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    The first stanza has an image of the writer trying to find those right words to capture his true feelings of a beauty. I really liked the line "crumpled papers can't accept my emotions"

    The second stanza draws a lovely picture where you can truly find your peace leaving behind the worries of the world. I can see those starlit butterflies..lovely pic!

    Everyone has
    their own
    brilliance...
    but your shadow
    is the
    brightest shine
    for me.

    ^^I like this ending statement. So true each one has their own brilliance, and inspiration in one form or the other. Whether it is dim or bright, big or small we each have a star that makes us smile..nicely penned.

  • 11 years ago

    by Everlasting

    Ah, this reminds me of a couple of poems I wrote a long time ago. Sweet memories. Specially the universe and the supernova.

    and If I continue, I would probably just ramble but I like the part that goes something like :

    there's nothing wrong
    with loving a star.

    I also like the tone in your poem, I can't put it in words but I read it calm. and you have a voice that sounds familiar.

    I enjoyed this piece.