Comments : New Beginnings

  • 11 years ago

    by Jacob

    Hun whats this about?

    • 11 years ago

      by Dominique Lewis

      I have been reading my scriptures a lot so I wrote this.

  • 11 years ago

    by Jacob

    Ok i thought you didnt like church ?

  • 11 years ago

    by Jacob

    Domm u need to talk to me fast :(

  • 11 years ago

    by Jacob

    Domm u need to talk to me fast :(

  • 10 years ago

    by Silent Scribbler

    Beautiful. Just beautiful.

  • 10 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    I am not going to pretend I am Christian because I am not. But this message is beautiful and strong. I think in life when we have times of trail we all have or want a new start. I liked this for the fact that we can all start over in someway and we all have the ability too. That's in life. And I know this poem is about heaven. Which is supposed to be a very beautiful place. A place where there is no pain at all. Your wording here is very beautiful because the imagery you describe is perfect. But I think we can have this beauty on earth too. :) anyways. People think of death as a bad thing but is it really? People fear it because I don't think they truly live their lives and be happy. Anyways loved this poem!

  • 10 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    When somebody passes on we always say that they are at a better place now. Honestly I do think about a life after, a better life. Until then I am trying to live here on earth the best I can.
    Well written, it makes you think