Gemini

This poem is also great. There are a lot of ways to go with this. I think you are lost in life and needed to be saved and this person was the lighthouse in your life. They brought a brightness to your life that was no longer there. I loved the vivid imagery as well. I can see this person waiting on the beach crying into the ocean like a madian waiting for her love to come back from sea. But this does have a much happier tone than that though. Overall. This is a lovely write that may even be a dedication to this person you love. Very heart touching. Well done

You have drawn the loneliness of a lighthouse with the feelings of emptiness which surrounds it. Though a guide for others, yet no guide for its own journey..love has its ways..a touching write.

This is a beautiful piece. How many times in life are we searching while lost for that beam of light to guide us back home. To finally feel as if the lighthouse has secured our loneliness our safety is worth every moment of struggle. A beautiful write.

William

You are making some awsome poems, gratulation on this
If happiness and loneliness where like ying and yang you would have gone a full circle.

That is absolutely beautiful, Andrea! I'm glad you gave some insight and that you two share an unbreakable bond. Love is precious!

I love the "Jim and I" and Gemini pairing... very unique and something cute you both share.