by Everlasting Dec 17, 2013
category :
Special events /
other poems
In my town - not a city like Rio Verde, |
by M.Useless
Excellent. I could smell the sickening sweetness of cotton candy, hear the screams of delight, the gasps, the oohs and the ahs from the crowd. Very nice. |
by Midnight Sky
Well well i'm in shock this is good piece 5\5 |
You have such a great gift. |
by Beautiful Soul
I am so glad this won. This is why I nominated it. The imagery is stunning through out and the wording tells a very real story that is vivid and plays well inside our minds. Congrats again and I loved this a lot :). Well done. |
by Breely
Loved the way you brought the circus to life with your powerful words, I felt as if I was there, could see and smell everything and feel the ambiance. I loved it. Very well written :) |