Congratulations on winning the club contest with this poem. You did a good job of pulling me into your experiences before, during and after the circus. It felt like I was right there at the circus, enjoying it for myself. To me that is what a writer needs to do, pull me in and make me a part of the story. Good job.

Congratulations :)) You really did a great job ;)

I love every detail in this and the tone and feel of the whole poem ;) Great Job 5/5

---MKKK

B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L!

Start to end, still wowed:-)

Great work!

You really know how to draw readers into your world and make them see what you see. Excellent..and congrats on the win!

Loved the way you brought the circus to life with your powerful words, I felt as if I was there, could see and smell everything and feel the ambiance. I loved it. Very well written :)

I am so glad this won. This is why I nominated it. The imagery is stunning through out and the wording tells a very real story that is vivid and plays well inside our minds. Congrats again and I loved this a lot :). Well done.

You have such a great gift.

Well well i'm in shock this is good piece 5\5

Excellent. I could smell the sickening sweetness of cotton candy, hear the screams of delight, the gasps, the oohs and the ahs from the crowd. Very nice.