by Mahal Ko Kuya Ko Dec 18, 2013
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other poems
This willowed road |
by Gwen Davis
Very nice work. I can't say one bad thing about it. Well done! |
by Meena Krish
Congrats on the 2nd place win and you surly gave the reader a very vivid journey with colors and emotions..well done! |
by Everlasting
That last stanza did the whole poem for me, congrats on coming second. We were just one point away. I like your comparisons. And how you take advantage of figurative language, though I do feel that if you made it a little bit clearer like the last stanza, the whole poem would be more than marvelous. Well done. |
by dalllllal
Wonderful wonderful poem i enjoyed this very much your way of writing is very unique and catches the small details in simple put words. great job |
by Ray Blue
~Full of life and substance! |