This is genuinely one of my favourite poems that I have ever read.

I love your writing style, it's almost like a story but with much more metaphor.

I'm not very good at comments, and I'll never be able to do this piece justice, but I couldn't just not comment xD

<3 ugh

Really good! Deserves another 5 from me...

Really nice & different 5/5

Absolutely the best you have ever written plus maybe the best I've ever heard... I listened to it before I read it and I really enjoyed it, I also wondered if you wrote it the way you were reciting... Because it was so diffrent to your normal style, but it was and that really surprised me , it seems to be more then just a quick write it seemed to be emotionally and written with such delicacy and time. So I took the time to read it slowly and a few times to really sink my teeth into this , your descriptions about your emotions were amazing , but the rain verse just sent electric round my heart deep to my soul , something you can , see touch call basically to prove that it's real , rain to say its name to feel to see to live among ... Chelsey , unbelievable

I've taken forever to comment on this, ugh.. I'm such a procrastinator. But I just read this all over again and it gave me chills! I can relate so freaking much to this because I'm with my high school sweetheart and it just took me back to those times of innocent love.

I'm so glad that you shared your recitation of this, it gives it more power and emotion! You are so great with reading your emotions, you can feel every inch of love and that touch of sadness in your voice, that longing... it's absolutely stunning!

I can't just pinpoint one single thing I love about this, I would just be repeating myself. I honestly think this is one of your absolute best poems and you should be very proud of it. I will be adding it to my favorites and will read it time and time again when I need a trip down memory lane.

I absolutely adored this... Its so heart breaking and beautiful all at once.