Missing

Is this for your mother, missing?

I read this as a heartbreaking poem full of void and sadness. The part that gets me (besides the ending):

one who has sculpted an
image of us with love and tears
left me...
like a stranger in a crowd
unowned, to face lonely years

^ like a stranger in a crowd, unowned, - this could candidate as one of the saddest lines. To be unowned means to not only lose a loved one, but to lose parents, forerunners.

And the ending, so haunting and frighteningly sad. Great work here.

You said she is the only person could see your unwilling laugh, I think it means you are in some unlike situations.
she only understands everything about u.
missing some one like this is very painfull for evreyone
I also like the way you describe the colorless autumn.
This is sad and wonderful poem meena.

The ending stanza got me, it really sank in me. Though crying and letting the sadness flow is a good thing, it helps. Take care.

This is full of sadness and longing... One of the saddest things in life is missing the one who means a lot to you... The one you can't live without... 5/5

--- MKKK