But I do glitter
because my Grandfather
loved me
more than
anyone else
in this world.

^^^ I like this realization. Love makes us glitter. I am realizing that this piece was easier to understand. Well done. Continue writing

Dashiel. This is a sad poem but it is full of wonderful imagery. I think what you are saying here is that even though your grandfather passed away he still lives on in your heart. He helped you grow up and now you can grow as a person inside and out. I loved the firefly metaphor because you shine brightest when you are with the family. I loved the meaning behind this as I think it's very touching and heartfelt. Well done

(I forgot
that it was
not only reveries
he made
but also
a love
that is
more than love)

^^This sums it up so beautifully and truthfully. Each verse you have penned carries memories and feelings tied together and this poem portrays that love never ceases..a touching read.

Beautifully written prose poem. So much reflections and realizations that made me wonder if the author was discovering little bits of himself while writing this one.

But that's the wonder of writing poetry, we find ourselves while opening up the hidden drawers of our heart.

Amazingly written and was a love to read from start to finish.