Comments : Christmas

  • 10 years ago

    by LittleMermaid

    Beautiful poem for beautiful festival.. I missed reading your poems... Thanks for sharing!!!!!!

  • 10 years ago

    by LittleMermaid

    Beautiful poem for beautiful festival.. I missed reading your poems... Thanks for sharing!!!!!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Ingrid

    A beautiful poem from a beautiful mind:)

    Well done, dear Peter. Indeed we should always show compassion and understanding for those around us less fortunate then us.

    This poem was also a short story and with a good message inside. It was very, very sad indeed.

    We should never forget we all are His children, and we should all look after our brothers and sisters.

    Merry Christmas!

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 10 years ago

    by East Poetry

    Wow, great poem, I enjoyed the whole read. it is so true how we take for granted what we have in this world, knowing there are thousands who are suffering and would give anything just to have a roof over their head.
    This Poem, as Peters Poems do, flowed and ryhmed beautifuly!

  • 10 years ago

    by Rebecca Bentley

    Peter... i am lost for words. this poem made me sob. its beautiful! the way you work with words is fantastic.
    i hope you had a lovely christmas and i hope you are well. its been a while x

    • 10 years ago

      by PETER EDWARDS

      Thanks Rebecca for your kind words, appreciated.
      Peter..

  • 10 years ago

    by Marvellous

    Wonder man!, I'm humbled at yet another magnificent craft of yours, keep the beauty, everyday young.

  • 10 years ago

    by Burning Angel

    I love this so much.

  • 8 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello Peter,

    this is so powerful and should bring home the reality of Christmas.

    There is so much greed and selfishness at this time when love is supposed to be shared.

    A very sad, but a needed message to be shared every Christmas.

    Take care,

    Michael