by Gwen Davis Dec 26, 2013
category :
Life, society /
about society
The smell of grass, a baby cryin', |
by Beautiful Soul
I loved the imagery you have here. Each stanza it seems like holds something you saw or did or heard throughout your whole life. Very beautiful overall here. I can imagine everything you said here which makes for a greater poem. I love the title it's very simple but holds a lot of meaning. You did well to use it in the poem as well. Well done. |
by Gwen Davis
Thanks so much. You inspire me to keep on posting. Thanks again for keeping it real with me! |