You know..this sort of reminds me of a song I like a lot, but with a different twist and meaning to it.
' No need to rush, take your time, make it last!
I'll grab the bottle and another glass. '

I like those last two lines for some reason. It just... it calls out to me, if that makes any sense? I can't exactly word it...

But overall, this whole poem is really awesome. Great job hun :)