Promise Me You Won't Fall

by Owner of an Untamed Heart   Dec 29, 2013


Actually, it's quite a shame.
You and I- we're too much of the same;
Two hearts rebelling against being tamed,
Both minds wrapped up in only loving the game.
We're just fools, tricking ourselves.
You shower me with gifts from right off the shelf.
In return, I pleasure you from below the belt-
That's all it is, without love being of help

And with it, we crash.
All we do is break,
And it's just too much for our hearts to take

Amazingly, there's still a vibe.
For as long as I live, my body will be your bride.
I feel six feet under but because you're so alive,
I began treasuring what was never mine.
We're just fools, tricking ourselves.
You shower me with gifts from right off the shelf.
In return, I pleasure you from below the belt-
That's all we are, without love being of help

And with it, we crash.
All we do is break,
And it's just too much for our hearts to take
Can we just be who we are
For our own sake's ?
Cause it's just too much for our hearts to take.

Unfortunately, we are fools,
And only fools fall in love all the time.
Promise not to fall for me and I won't fall for you.
Promise me, promise me, promise me.

Cause with it, we'll crash.
All we'll do is break,
And it'll be too much for our hearts to take.
So don't think about doing it before it's too late,
Cause it'll be too much for our hearts to take.

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  • 10 years ago

    by BlueJay

    All in all I had to reread this piece quite a few times to decide what I wanted to say about it. I was going to disect it by stanza but i decided that might bore you so:

    You have a wonderful way with introducing your pieces, your first stanza always grips me and makes me wonder what you are trying to say this time. You always surprise me with how in depth you take the piece or information so quickly.

    I love your descriptions and your word choice its so simple but its so much more than the bare bone at the same time. I love that and its a wonderful skill (I admit I'm still working on that myself :P )

    Wonderful, amazing write. you are so talented :)

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