All in all I had to reread this piece quite a few times to decide what I wanted to say about it. I was going to disect it by stanza but i decided that might bore you so:

You have a wonderful way with introducing your pieces, your first stanza always grips me and makes me wonder what you are trying to say this time. You always surprise me with how in depth you take the piece or information so quickly.

I love your descriptions and your word choice its so simple but its so much more than the bare bone at the same time. I love that and its a wonderful skill (I admit I'm still working on that myself :P )

Wonderful, amazing write. you are so talented :)