Again I am in love with this poem. The title is wonderful and goes very well with the poem I feel. It's amazing how you used metaphors throughout and entangled them with nature tones and elements. I thought the poem worked well overall because of the love you have for this person and nature in general. I loved the ending it has a very romantic side to it as well. You found yoursoul mate and that is not an easy thing to do. Overall the story and imagery work well together. I loved the character personality of the girl as well. You make your characters shine in your ppoems which is a big thing. Well done :)