by Dawn Manna Jul 4, 2004
category :
Internet slang /
love, romance
When you look at me |
great job! i feel that same way about someone so this really touched me. keep up your awesome work! |
by nikki
that was gorgeous. very sweet poem. i loved it. great rhyming! keep it up |
That was a sweet poem. Good rhyme. Eventhough the syllabels remained uneven through out the poem, it looked ok. The meaning of the poem was cute. |
by Kristina K
Hey Dawn. Great work. Very well written piece of poetry. Very good descriptions and nice wording. It sure was an honor to have read your work. Keep writing! |