Hey Dawn. Great work. Very well written piece of poetry. Very good descriptions and nice wording. It sure was an honor to have read your work. Keep writing!
Kind regards,
Kristina

That was a sweet poem. Good rhyme. Eventhough the syllabels remained uneven through out the poem, it looked ok. The meaning of the poem was cute.

that was gorgeous. very sweet poem. i loved it. great rhyming! keep it up

great job! i feel that same way about someone so this really touched me. keep up your awesome work!