by marlena Jan 6, 2014
category :
Love, romance /
first love
My first love is Craig Wallace and the last he is my world and my lover but it hard to find one out there that u will love for ever |
by Everlasting
Love is hard to find. But I think when is found is totally worthy. I would have liked to read a little more of your piece. At first read I felt it was kind of short though it was straight to the point. I think (just a suggestion) to use either more punctuation or to take advantage of line breaks to hint the reader where you want them to make pauses. But I liked the read. |