by Ren Jan 10, 2014
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Oh, Beautiful Stranger... |
Fabulous, a wonderful piece, rhyming and imagery couldn't be better. Great job x |
by Ren
Thank you so very much!! :) |
by Hope
I feel the wonderment of this poem for the stranger from afar, great piece. Love it! |
by Ren
Thank you so much!! :) |
by mossgirl19
Dear Cowgirl, what a beautiful, excellent piece! First of all, the title is brilliant, and the message of the poem kills me. The flow is absolutely beautiful and I must agree with Alec, not forced, but all the emotions just seem to tumble out with the unfolding of every line! Agree with Frank totally, this is like reading a symphony! Wow may fall short to describe how amazed I am of your talent. I am not only impressed, I appreciate you even more. Added to favorites! |
by Ren
Dearest Lady Mel Liz, you are too kind!! I truly appreciate your beautiful words!! I'm glad you enjoyed this piece, and I appreciate you so much!! Thanks again! Much love to you!! :) |
by Alec
Wow. There is a lot of emotion here! It flows well which you don't see often with rhyming poems... none of it seems forced, or interferes with your story. Love it! |
by Ren
Thank you so much!! I really appreciate you taking the time to read and comment :) |
by Brenda
Ren, I really liked this a lot. I was totally engrossed the entire read. Really nice rhyming through out. Wasn't sure if this stranger was there to harm you or just make an appearance in your life. Well done! |
by Ren
Thank you so much Brenda!! I really appreciate you taking the time to read and comment :) |