Snow (Pleiades)

by Meena Krish   Jan 15, 2014


Snow

Scent of crisp air
sings far and wide,
snow angels play music of
silent white rain, where
sinless crystal tears fall
sculpting purity upon nature
securely blanketing the world.

Pleiades, only one word is allowed in the title
followed by a single seven line stanza. The first
word in each line begins with the same letter as
the title.

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  • 9 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    I admire the Pleiades form! It's small but detailed and Meena is the Lady to make this form shine in all its glory!
    She has brought to life, the beauty of SNOW!
    The feelings of nature are positive and breathtaking and sometimes simplicity and down to earth writing is what is needed to bring the feelings of that beauty to life. Very pretty poem here!

  • 10 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Very beautiful written

  • 10 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Wow, this is so beautiful and talented.

    I have never seen this form before, so thank you for introducing that to me. It looks very interesting to attempt, which I might do one day.

    Your wording was beautiful, and I think the 7 lines work really well for the nature tone, the theme blends so well with all your words, and the words with the letter S, seem to fit really well and non cliché words.

    I enjoyed this, and it held a very peaceful tone through out.

    Well done

  • 10 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Superb Write Meena!!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Amreen

    Awesome! Sorry I haven't been active lately but I really cannot miss out on your formed poems. This form is indeed new to me and I see how perfectly have you incorporated a beautiful picture within it. I really applaud your brilliance for painting such a profound picture with this poem.

    Keep writing:)

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