Excellent =) Loved it alot, I too felt this way before, and when I told him about the way I feel and asked him all these questions you asked in the end of your poem he started to get all anxious =D... He didn't realize it was just the work of love & too much happiness ;)

Fatimah

Thanks so much for all your really lovely comments. They may not all be goode, but its how I vent my anger and share my feelings. I was going to give this particular poem to my boyfriend for his birthday so any comments on it would be greatly appreciated, also any ways I could improve it! Thanks again so much!

Penny xxxxx

wow i love this...it is kinda how i feel about my boyfriend john. he is 2 years older than me and he is totally amazing but i can never figure out why he wants to be with me and not some other girl. this is really great...keep writing