"this pit felt so cold and lonely
water dripping and slippery rocks all around me
unable to climb above the pain and regrets
that keep grasping me toward an ending"

-By reading that, i saw different kinds of images in my head, good job on being descriptive

"just tell me "i'm an fool" already
because i'm trapped in this pit for too long
i'll never trust again or believe
in the feeling of true love
when i'm still trying my best to overcome
this lost love that tossed me into this pit of sadness "

-the last stanza was very sad, moving on isnt really that easy.. you portrayed your feelings well,, all in all i think the poem was great 5/5 :)