Your poems are always great to me because of the imagery and personslly you are a great story teller. I loved the spin on a fairytale here. You can always take a simple thing and make it's world come alive. The wording you used here is lovely and I loved the "hinting" words. Like I will pinpoint Unicorn. I think thatcan be rrepresented as beauty. I think what the story is about is about a girl who had an affair but you compare it to a flower. I love when you do this because you always bring out the true meaning to your flowers and pinpoint every detail for them. :). I loved this overall as it shows the strength in your imagery. Well done

Wow, I love the story and the unique twist in this piece. It's very well done. I don't know what else to say about this piece, and I feel bad about that, but i can say well written and well done. And I agree with everytning previously stated.

A modern day Cinderella story. Where love touches and then it all goes away..just like that. Like a fleeting kiss..another beautiful write!

I like this a lot, with words and imagery that convey the magic and joy of a love affair and then a sense of sadness and loss that its suddenly gone and perhaps imaginary. Very well done.