by Chelsey Jan 19, 2014
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
If we communicated like the moon and the ocean, maybe |
by Britt
This is pretty different feeling from your other poetry - you really intrigued me, and I keep coming up with own ideas in my head. I don't know that there's a piece I like more than the other (there is one part, the parting airways I didn't love - it sounded weird to me when I read it), but otherwise I really, really loved the rest of it. It felt natural, rather than a bunch of fanciness strung together. The questioning is always fun in poetry for me because it feels to me like the writer truly just doesn't know - what better way than to try to explore feelings through poetry? Loved this. |