Firstly I loved this because of the imagery and message. I love nature so I connected with this well. I believe what you are saying here is the earth weeps within because we are hurting her. I loved how you made it seem like the earth is a person. My favorite word in the poem is eclipse. It seems like the tears or pain go unheard or unseen like an eclipse. You started out strongly using celestial. I feel like it works here because it connects with the flow of the poem and what you were trying to say. I think the meaning all together is keep the world safe. Well done.