Your talent is an obvious legend on the site. The choice of words is every poet's desire. You should be proud. I really enjoyed it.

I agree with gness. Your wording amd imagery is impeccable and great. This poem is great because it tells a great story. I can imagine this enfolding well. I love the description of the kissing of the moon and that tells me it's night time. Maybe the only time this person really "lives" I loved the spin on the lord of the rings story though. This is dark yes but sweet. I love how you focused on one character and how greed has taken over a soul. I'm not sure if it was intentional but you kinda show how the world is sadly. We always want more and don't enjoy the simple things in life. I enjoyed the ending here very much. A lil romance though dark was thrown in and it enhances the story and the twist. Overall great poem :).

The voice jumps out at you very dark & raw i love your poetry really love it you becoming a favorite my dear