by Sincuna Jan 21, 2014
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
It is not the pale moon that brought you here |
by Skyfire
I can truly feel the aching in this poem. You've used some beautiful wording. |
by silvershoes
I really like this. The metaphor seems familiar and obvious, then again, I'm not sure I've heard it quite this way before, or at all. That says something. |
by Everlasting
I continued reading this poem yet wondering why it struck me like it did. I think I finally understood why. I wrote a poem from the perspective of a branch, not so well written but it's about the opposite of this poem. This one leaves a soothing effect and it has a tone that invites the readers to well read it but it's not just to read it. it's like idk. I really like it. One of my favs from yours. |
by Melissa
Oh good golly, this is beautiful! I could never tire of reading your poetry. Wish I had my very own Auzy anthology to read again and again. And again. (: I love where your writing has gone. So sweet! |
by Kakera
Heavily, this breathes aching into my chest. Simply amazing. |