Comments : After All This Time

  • 10 years ago

    by BlueJay

    This piece us so authentic and genuine, its so real and so simple. Teeming with emotion and love. Friendship and care. Great job you penned something absolutely fantastic here. And you used such a wonderful use of skill, AMAZING!

    My favorite stanza:

    I still smile every time I hear your melodic laughter
    and feel butterflies in my stomach whenever we touch,
    I still feel what I felt back then if not more now.

  • 10 years ago

    by Midnight Sky

    This makes me think of a wonderful girl in my life. It makes me happy sad. Everything good job if you can make me cry you did something right.

  • 10 years ago

    by don

    Beautiful

    don