by lacie Jan 22, 2014
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Many parts to my broken heart |
by Beautiful Soul
I liked the rhyme scheme you used overall. It has a nice flow to it overall. You describe pretty well how a broken heart feels like. It's really hard to deal with losing someone. A lot of times we do feel like when our heart hurts it is the end of the world. It's not but I understand. In the moment that we get hurt It's like nothing else matters. Great poem overall because of the emotions you show. Well done. |