by lacie Jan 22, 2014
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I need you |
by Beautiful Soul
I think when you are in love, we all need to feel that one person close to us. I again love the emotion you write about here. There are a couple of mistakes again. Loose should be lose and you spelled receive wrong. But otherwise this is a really nice poem. You can tell you really loved this person and I can also tell you are hurt. Love can be such a magical thing but if you get hurt then it's difficult to trust again. Well done. |