Danielle and Vinnie

Really beautiful poem.
Birds of one feather, together they shall fly
lovely Poem.

A beautiful poem. A superb dedication about true love.

The comparison between two people in love and feathers I love. You can say that love leaves you lighthearted and makes you feel free. Just like a feather blowing in the wind. In the second stanza I loved the connection between the feather and birds. Because birds have the ability to be very beautiful and again free. The kiss is a great touch because it can connect two people as one. The ending line is so powerful! Together they fly because their souls are now one. Overall. This is a great poem. The message is short but powerful. The stanzas connect so well and it's free flowing throughout. Very well done here! Also using their names in the title I love because it makes it more real and personalized :)