This is really heartbreaking poem,
For my love have I lost
Gone from this world
But not from my heart
^^Yes, may be true love gone from this world only but not in our heart, it lives forever.
good written and it's better for at least your emotions came out in this way...
keep writing.
Heartbreaking, raw, deep, emotional and so sad, i feel for you both,
no words anyone can say , will help, butknow this, there are people that do care,
don
10 years ago
by Lune de ma vie
What a powerful poem with such feeling seeping out each word.
You captured tons of emotion within this piece, it was really good.
Very well written and easily relating for the reader to feel your feelings.
Amazing job.
It is truly rare to find a love poem so raw and deep as this one, keep it up.