This poem is a metaphoric rhyme scheme of brilliance!!!!
What a wonderful poem by Larry!
The loss of a limb is symbolic or perhaps is the base line of the poem, but either way I took several deeper angles with this poem.
I truly enjoy poems where I can rock and sway as I read, just like a song, and with this poem I was left speechless. The word usage and play on words, angled with a rhyme flow was the perfect touch for this incredible poem!!
8 years ago
by Em
Larry,
What a beautifully written piece with plenty play on words and imagery to see us through. The rhyming was tremendous and kept the flow upbeat throughout.
The loss of a limb being the base of the piece which gave it a more serious prospect.
Em