Haiku For You, times three

Beautiful and belated happy 8 anniversary :D

Happy late Anniversary you two :D I hope it was wonderful cause you two deserve it. :)

Sweetie this is very beautiful I'm sorry for taking so long I love you

This is a good poem kaitlyn but there is a concern for me. This is a good attempt at a triple haiku but you left words hanging on the edge. It takes away the flow if the poem I feel. But as for the poem as a whole. I liked it because you put your heart into it again. You really this person and I can tell. When you love someone so very much you would do anything for them. I love that there is passion in this. As the reader I can feel the love into this and I can feel so connected these character. There is happiness inside their heart. Overall I like this because of the consisant tone throughout. The character cone alive through your pen and their personalities shine. Well done