As i sit in my shelter watching the drops of rain
i sometimes find it hard to contain
My anger and fear
At being alone and trapped here
i watch the people as they walk by

^^ The flow here is off, I'm not entirely sure how to fix it or even if you'd want to, but its very distracting to the reader.

The rest of the poem is interesting, well written but you used some, odd descriptions or annalogies that really did not make sense at first, and honestly I think you took the bear thing a little too far in this piece.

Well i guess it dosent really mater, i write as i feel, and it makes sence to me,

but ty for the bold words, i applaud your courage,

take care my young friend

Keep writing. You are doing a great job expressing yourself

Ty my friend, it helps get the crap out of my head,

i appreciate you taking the time to read and comment, take care

feel free to pm me anytime

don