by Robert Gardiner Jan 29, 2014
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
(These are alternative versions of the same poem It was originally titled Naked Aphrodite, and was about the Goddess Aphrodite. It's opening line regaling her sea birth "Rising, from the sea, Naked, a Vision, of Such Loveliness", but I decided to do a new version that could Herald Any Goddess, Any Beautiful, Alluring Woman.that did So Captivate, and so I changed a few line, to Honor Any Goddess (Bewitching Woman). Let me know hat you thing of the poem. Your comment and votes are greatly appreciated, thank you.) |
by Mohan
Lovely write.... |
by Meena Krish
Except for some word changes between the two versions, the rhyme and smoothness makes the read enchanting. I do like the second version better though. All in all, whatever you write about turns out nice. Keep penning and take care. |