by Beautiful Soul
This is a very beautiful poem meena. I believe what you are saying is that life is hard. You have questions that you want answered and you don't know why something has happened. Maybe the loss of a loved one or a friend. The nights are hard for you because it's a feeling of loneliness. I loved the imagery of the painted blue sky. It seems you were trying to say that even in the dark you can see the light. Overall this is a very beautiful poem. The rhyming was great and the message was strong. Nominated!!! |
I don't even know where to begin. This is such a touching write. Life is full of surprises, never know what is in storage. I love the part about quietly printing the canvas with blue art. I like to paint and often use blue to express my sadness. The day is long, filled with so many questions and so little answers. The truth of the matter we should never doubt ourselves. |
by Sylvia
I think this reflects the confusion you feel since you mother passed away. I know the feeling of knowing they won't be there to turn to for help and answers or input when we have questions or just want to talk. The pain is still there and prodded minute by minute by memories, a smell, a sound and grows during the day with the grand finale at night when we are forced to face the pain and our thoughts. Nicely written |
by Mohan
Questions without answers its really frastrating for us, |
by Jyoti Rawat
Very nice u write here what is going on in my mind & heart. |
by Everlasting
Days got the mind thinking, |
by Baby Rainbow
I felt there was a lot which could have been taken from this. The tone is definitely deep, reflective, somewhat melancholy. |