by Love Jan 31, 2014
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
You tangled your hands |
by Jyoti Rawat
Interesting poem |
by Beautiful Soul
This is such a lovely poem. Though the title doesn't fit with the rest of the poem. So I personally would change it. For the poem though I lov e it because you take this sweet hearted person and make them very sad. You fall in love and get hurt in the end. Very tragic. But the wording is spot on and the ending is very powerful. Great write |