You have expressed your feelings well in just few words. Love it.
8 years ago
by Em
A very well expressed, emotion filled piece.
You put all effort into this piece just so people can have a piece of you, if that makes sense.
Anger comes swiftly
Guilt comes too late
Worry comes too often
Adding to my already full plate
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A beautiful sombre opening which many of us can relate to. Yes, guilt often comes too late usually when a person is already broken.
Sorrow stays in shadows
Happiness, there's not enough
Hate comes out most
Making me appear tough
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I agree there is not enough happiness in this world because it's full of hatred towards each other. Again very relatable.
A shattered heart at my core
Bleeding inside
Life seems meaningless
I guess I've already died
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Wow a very emotional ending. I suppose once we are broken it's hard for life to mean anything but it does and we just need to pull ourselves back up.