Comments : Storm Of Emotions

  • 9 years ago

    by Rheanne Lilian Drew

    You have expressed your feelings well in just few words. Love it.

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    A very well expressed, emotion filled piece.
    You put all effort into this piece just so people can have a piece of you, if that makes sense.

    Anger comes swiftly
    Guilt comes too late
    Worry comes too often
    Adding to my already full plate
    ^^
    A beautiful sombre opening which many of us can relate to. Yes, guilt often comes too late usually when a person is already broken.

    Sorrow stays in shadows
    Happiness, there's not enough
    Hate comes out most
    Making me appear tough
    ^^
    I agree there is not enough happiness in this world because it's full of hatred towards each other. Again very relatable.

    A shattered heart at my core
    Bleeding inside
    Life seems meaningless
    I guess I've already died
    ^^
    Wow a very emotional ending. I suppose once we are broken it's hard for life to mean anything but it does and we just need to pull ourselves back up.

    All the best, Em