by Maple Tree Feb 2, 2014
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
I felt a pinch- |
by Meena Krish
This is so beautiful and the imagery just comes out and grabs the reader. The story unfolds into a dark romance, making the heart sigh. Excellent write! |
by Ole Carsten
Hi |
by Karla
Life is made of opposites.Amazing piece. |
by Beautiful Soul
Your wording and imagery always get to me Andrea. To me this poem is about a person with a beautiful heart and a person with a "dark" heart. That come together as one. They do say opposites attract. The message of this poem to me is don't judge a book by their cover or don't judge a person by they look. Because here you are saying the person with a "dark" heart is the good and you can see the good in people. The ending is perfect. It captures the poem well as two souls can come together no matter what. Overall this is a beautiful write. Nominated! |
by DarkLight
Wow..! that's a good piece. |