Comments : Knight of Day

  • 10 years ago

    by DarkLight

    Wow..! that's a good piece.

  • 10 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    Your wording and imagery always get to me Andrea. To me this poem is about a person with a beautiful heart and a person with a "dark" heart. That come together as one. They do say opposites attract. The message of this poem to me is don't judge a book by their cover or don't judge a person by they look. Because here you are saying the person with a "dark" heart is the good and you can see the good in people. The ending is perfect. It captures the poem well as two souls can come together no matter what. Overall this is a beautiful write. Nominated!

  • 10 years ago

    by Karla

    Life is made of opposites.Amazing piece.

  • 10 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Hi

    What different poem, yet so like life, a bit ying and yang. We are attrackted to the darker sides in us, it is like you are showing more of yourself here. I mean that in the most positive way.
    You have many layers here that has to be unfolded in new style of poems
    I have been a fan of your poems, but this is the one of a million.

  • 10 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    This is so beautiful and the imagery just comes out and grabs the reader. The story unfolds into a dark romance, making the heart sigh. Excellent write!