by Mohan
Nice dedication, |
by Beautiful Soul
I also enjoyed the beginning of this. I loved how you took a very sad moment and spun it around in away. Death is a time for grieving but it's also a time to celebrate I agree. It just means they live with no more pain. Your wording is great and the rhymes were wonderful. I loved the message as well. Though this person you cared for deeply has passed on you know they are safe and their memories will always be with you. bbeautiful poem and dedication. I'm gonna nominate this because it really touched my heart. 5/5 |
by Rusheena
Thanks :) |
Awe so beautiful and wonderfully wirrten!!! 100/100 |