Comments : Gazing long at the abyss

  • 10 years ago

    by Alexis

    More one dancing star, Karla?Miss you.

  • 10 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Sixty-two lies ?

    A very straight poem full of your thoughts and vivid ideas
    you are a special poet,

    I like the giving birth line

  • 10 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    Karla, This poem touches my heart so much and I don't know why. Every time I have read it it amazes me moreand more. I believe there could be a ton of meanings this could be. But each stanza holds iit's own story and could be their own poem, that's how beautiful this is. There is a ton of tones here as well. Love, sadness, darkness... and each one is very well used through out. I personally loved the ending line as well. But I don't know if my comment can do this poemjustice at all. Your words are bbeautiful in each line and again tell a story.
    I believe altogether this poem is about love but it's also not in the love category. It could also be about losing or missing a loved one. There is so much to this I just don't know. But your poem touched my heart so much.Your imagery is vivid and your mmetaphors are stunning. Beautiful beautiful write. You are brilliant.