Comments : Forgotten Sons (Part II)

  • 11 years ago

    by Darren

    This poem is immense, it is very difficult to read at first glance, but if you read it aloud it comes alive with its emotion and the real dark tone.

    Your narrative and descriptive writing sets a real scene and plonks the reader right into your world.

    great write

    nominated for sure.

    • 11 years ago

      by Smaccams

      Yes, thank you! I've been rather interested in a slightly more narrative tone when writing, as I find creating a sort of story makes it much easier to construct.

      Plus it sparks my imagination just to make it as alive as you say!

      Thank you again dearly for the nomination.