by Beautiful Soul
I can really feel the love for this person you have. I am not a big fan of love poems but this one is a bit different. I loved the way you worded it. It seems to enfold into a story almost and it could be real. I loved the first staza because no matter what this person is thinking of you and I enjoyed the no nightmare line. When you are in love it seems like nothing can ever hurt you. The second stanza is where you grow simple but you detailed all the small things like holding hands that make love special. Just beinh together makes everything alright and better. The ending is good too. Marriage is almost like the final step to always be with each other. It seems like the story is the past, present and future which I like a lot. Very beautiful wording and story. |
Thank you :) |
This is not a typical love poem. And like beautiful soul said me also I am not a big fan of love poems. This one caught my eye. |
Thank you very much Dagmar. :) |
by Trinity Heart
Awwwww sooo sweet my kitten |